Description: What are you looking for in terms of feedback? People to be nice and say it was pretty! lol jk honest opinions..Any background information behind the piece? Uh nope not any im not even in that kind of relationship yet! Hints? On what? Is this just to vent? Possibly. Emotional state while writing?Sleepy and drugged with self esteem and pride and a huge crush!
Hold Me Now -------------------------------------------
Through the night
And through the day
Chose to leave
Or chose to stay
Hold me now
So close to you
Never let me go
Never let me slip through
Our love has and will last
Through the future and back to our past
When the world ends
Our world will begin
One love, true and pure
People say it wouldn't last a year
And we still want more
To us it was clear
Please hold me now
An never let go
I am sure
I want this to work
And it's going to work
I feel it in my heart
It's like a slinky in my stomach
Tickling my ribcage
Letting me know
That everything's going to be
Fine
I like this poem. One love so true and pure People say it wouldn't last a year This poem shows how much confidence it is you have in your relationship. I enjoyed this very much. I liked the message that you got out.
hey this is sounding like not not many people believe in you two like everyone has doubts. Well hang in there it doesn't matter what the family thinks because they will end up liking you two together later on. If you are really in love dont split up because or other people.
you've done it again. the first poem i read of yours, i'll admit, it didn't seem like you'd be the person to show love, even if it hasn't happened yet. and now... its all over this piece. the way you left the last word hangin on its own. i like that.
i really enjoyed this and think that it is great . in a way i can relate to this because i have been told that it is going to be hard and my relationship may not work witth my husband and i are from diffrent backgrounds. i am caucasion and he is asian. well great write lia
Submission Name: Hold Me Now
