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    dots Submission Name: The order of thingsdots
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    Author: Rainwater
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 7/29/19
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Find yourself a nice gentleman
    And I'll find myself a madam

    And one day
    We'll both be dead




    Submitted on 2012-03-15 04:48:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      God I love this kind of thing. Something like a non sequitur, though not quite. Bringing everything down to its ultimate conclusion.

    Now I'm looking up humor tropes on wikipedia. Maybe this is anti-humor? 'What do you get when a man and a women marry' 'death'.

    | Posted on 2012-03-20 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah yes, life is terminal. Whether you go for social culture or wicked nymphs you wind up in the same place. Dead!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Philosophy on a stick. I like it.
    | Posted on 2012-03-15 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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