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The order of things

Author: Rainwater
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The order of things

Find yourself a nice gentleman
And I'll find myself a madam

And one day
We'll both be dead

Submitted on 2012-03-15 04:48:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  God I love this kind of thing. Something like a non sequitur, though not quite. Bringing everything down to its ultimate conclusion.

Now I'm looking up humor tropes on wikipedia. Maybe this is anti-humor? 'What do you get when a man and a women marry' 'death'.

| Posted on 2012-03-20 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ]
  Ah yes, life is terminal. Whether you go for social culture or wicked nymphs you wind up in the same place. Dead!!

| Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
  Philosophy on a stick. I like it.
| Posted on 2012-03-15 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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