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    dots Submission Name: What Ever...dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    What ever happened to trustworthy people?
    How come you only have 20/20 vision in "hind sight"
    Why does it have to hurt so much when others stab you in the back?
    What ever happened to reliable people?
    Why is reasonable to others, I am to be reliable
    Yet, it is just asking way too much for them to be expected of the same?
    Where has peoples integrity gone?
    Did I not get the memo?
    Am I living in a world surrounded by people with no morals at all??
    Why do we throw self respect out the window
    When it become "fucking"
    And not "making love"
    I would ask why there are so many teen mothers, then again I suppose I just answered that one...

    These questions and so many more swirl threw my mind
    Constantly occupied with new questions
    too many "what if's" ...
    Carried away by my own imagination




    Submitted on 2012-03-15 12:29:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Life is more to do with "what is" and less to do with "what if"

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    AbsolutelyLost
    | Posted on 2012-03-15 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]


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