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    dots Submission Name: God is Idots
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    Author: Anneboleyn707
    ASL Info:    18/Female/Pennsylvania
    Elite Ratio:    3.96 - 44/84/67
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsGod is Idots
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    I is to Me
    As God is to We.
    Action without coercion--
    The requisite to truly be.
    So what truly is,
    Cannot be but free,
    Will not implore reactions from
    Highly reflexive Me,
    Who cannot speak
    Of obscure I,
    Cannot make Unminding mind,
    Cannot define it,
    For in attempt,
    Two me's collide,
    And I's exempt,

    In that phenomenon,
    Me cannot deny,
    The latitude of Me, of We
    Mere atoms in our I




    Submitted on 2012-03-15 14:47:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah yes, the infamous weness of us. Not to be confused with the notorious theyness in them. If I could see the sum of I in me. But we mustn't confuse this with the impunity of in-absentia for we really live here.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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