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    dots Submission Name: vesseldots

    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Some words that just had to come out, make of it what you will.

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    I have no room for qualms and narrow minded energies,
    I am en route to complete God's words sewn to my bones.

    I am nothing and can never be full without a taste of His grace,
    I am no force or being without the Kings blood in my veins.

    I cannot rise and cannot fall without divine consent,
    I pray to always be a channel of blessings heaven sent.

    In me lives He, the slayer of fear and needs incomplete,
    The Lord speaks into this vessel, His voice waters the seeds.


    Submitted on 2012-03-16 14:54:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hierdiť is suiwer ekstase en hoog aangeskrewe. Bly so. Dankie Joppie.
    | Posted on 2012-03-21 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]
      i walk with a calm step if he is in my shoes.

    | Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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