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Author: Clayman
ASL Info:    28 - getting late
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Misc
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Some words that just had to come out, make of it what you will.


I have no room for qualms and narrow minded energies,
I am en route to complete God's words sewn to my bones.

I am nothing and can never be full without a taste of His grace,
I am no force or being without the Kings blood in my veins.

I cannot rise and cannot fall without divine consent,
I pray to always be a channel of blessings heaven sent.

In me lives He, the slayer of fear and needs incomplete,
The Lord speaks into this vessel, His voice waters the seeds.


Submitted on 2012-03-16 14:54:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hierdié is suiwer ekstase en hoog aangeskrewe. Bly so. Dankie Joppie.
| Posted on 2012-03-21 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]
  i walk with a calm step if he is in my shoes.

| Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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