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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Some words that just had to come out, make of it what you will.


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    dotsvesseldots
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    I have no room for qualms and narrow minded energies,
    I am en route to complete God's words sewn to my bones.

    I am nothing and can never be full without a taste of His grace,
    I am no force or being without the Kings blood in my veins.

    I cannot rise and cannot fall without divine consent,
    I pray to always be a channel of blessings heaven sent.

    In me lives He, the slayer of fear and needs incomplete,
    The Lord speaks into this vessel, His voice waters the seeds.

    Svw




    Submitted on 2012-03-16 14:54:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hierdié is suiwer ekstase en hoog aangeskrewe. Bly so. Dankie Joppie.
    | Posted on 2012-03-21 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]
      i walk with a calm step if he is in my shoes.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-03-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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