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    dots Submission Name: Childhooddots

    Author: Toadslayer
    ASL Info:    35/Female/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 32/38/15
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 432
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    Blanket tightly clutched,
    My entourage of kitties,
    And I, greet the day.

    Submitted on 2012-03-17 17:25:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked your poem as well. I also greet the day with my cat patting my cheek to wake me up. I shall think about writing a poem about mine.. Thanks for sharing.. Desi
    | Posted on 2012-03-18 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
      lol! This is a wistful and delightful muse! I love cats and have many poems about them.
    | Posted on 2012-03-18 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like your just about ready to join that great big puppy pile in the sky. Get out to it, the mystic symbiosis of spiritual sky, The heights out of depths, don't forget your oblong sideways.

    | Posted on 2012-03-17 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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