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    dots Submission Name: Jaded Seal Ordinand dots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1083/406/116
    Words: 1133
    Class/Type: Rant/Passion
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       I'm so lonely. Nobody loves me unless I over simplify. I think I'll take my martial arts trainee (Jaded seal ordinand) down to the corner and see if I can find a likely suspect to flash my badge at. Seriously, I'm reposting this in protest. I think it's a real ass kicker!!!


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    Haberdashery hauberk harbinger harangue equilibrist, harpy harsh hast severities.
    Inane inert inertia innate, juxtaposition maenad ethos affinities.
    Putrid quasi queasy pathos, emanate imminent perdition acerbities.

    Agnate aggregate anathema android amalgamated, predication contract.
    Glutton paradoxical dichotomy greaves, gauntlets gamut catalyst abstract.
    Ambidextrous amatory prelude amaze, analeptic adrenergic analgesia analytics extract.

    Clairaudience clairvoyant omnipresence presage, omnipotent omnificent omniscience.
    Pantheism parapet paradigm intuition, prognosticating prosthesis prediction.
    Prolific profusity profundity prosaics, nimbus nimiety nitty gritty, intrados rubato.

    Venerable divinatory deity deify veneration, delineate demagoguery ecstasy, agonist agog.
    Dream gleam cream seam beam team, serene ravine green gene careen, obscene demean.
    Empiricise the existentialisms in the demagoguery of godhead aspiration.
    Corporeal anaclitic apex inveterate embezzlement extroversion, acuitous alacrity extortion.
    Extraneous extemporaneous, ominous phenomena portrayal spontaneous synchronous, aorist actuator.

    Endergonicaly protensive integration extrapolation interpolations investiture elicits.
    Scenario synopsis synthesis syncopation, harmony rhymes rhythm.
    Synchronous transition transposition interlude, summerialy derivational cognition.
    Irkness ire aerie altruism allegorical, autonomous avarice oscillating ostracism.
    Pandemonium obdurate temerity impunity, impending preponderance onus, numinous illuminisms quintessential frolic.
    Amorous ardent argent arduous enamor endear, plenary putschist volatile phatic.
    Conveyor controvert deft mesmeric deification deist dissertation.
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    Vernaculars opulent myriad, aesthetic stratagem venial vexatious, astral projection conjurous levity apothegms.

    Incite epistemological illuminisms, accoutrements umbrage ultraism incognito trajectory extant.
    Scandalous scavenger squalid anomalous punitive, heuristic manumission exigency.
    Ostensible proclivity prodigious querulous, rambunctious repertoire rigmarole scenic schism sooth.
    Ascribe arsenal crucial critical, abhorrent abstinence blatancy berserk, alacritous celerity brogue.
    Ceremonial chicanery dynamism fealty, indefatigable incontrovertible ingenuity ingratiate inimical impugn.
    Innovate integrity intricate invective convolution, licentious metaphor convection obeisance.
    Splurgeness spry sporadic sprawl, spurious staunch succinct stymie tacit, irate tirade treatise vehement escapade tedium.

    Probitous irascibly veracious audacity mendacity gumption.
    Paphian peccavi preternatural proclivity gesticulation articulation prestidigitation.
    Fantastication fantasia fabulist facade, glimmer glisten translucent refulgence.
    Subliminally subjunctive nostalgic allusion analogies eidetic's mnemonics.
    Metaphysical mystique's evolutionally metamorphic futurity fatidics.
    Adroit agile nimble tactile acuity prescience capacity intrigue.
    Unadulteratedly fornicatious fabrications, portentous ethereal etiquette.
    Nose agnate somatalogy morphology metamorphic, cognition epistemology pragmatics.
    Ontological ontogeny causality exigency integumence equivocal.
    Innocuous noumenal verity nonce affectation intentions.

    Adumbrate intimate obfuscate preterite rendition intimidate.
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    Vaunt ness verve's lucidly illusive, intrepid yare's predilection predication.
    Apriori aposteriori apostrophe shards shroud, innately inert inherency interstitial endemics.

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    Horizon hornswoggle huckster, hokey hoot ornery honkies.

    Horologist hackamore relative rationality.
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    Personification of sartorial perfection, picturesque visage of spectral grace.
    Cosmic enigma rational relativity.

    Housebreak huckster squabble brash, hovel huff.
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    Caustic cavernous celibate catatonic phonics, apex crux axis matrix cortex cephalic.
    Blasphemous farcical fugueness and estranged ensemble orchestration acoustics.
    Rendition: various assorted forms of related stranger weirdness.
    Conjugation coercion junction function, adjunct conjunction conjecture.
    Concoct deontology ontogeny, ontological enclitic osteopathy.
    Anticipate angary amentia, tiercel theocracy.
    Phrenic sensorium sentiment paragon tangible.
    Covert aspersion avidity, coherent avid avarice, allegory allocate amatory prelude annex annul.

    Tantamount telepathy tantalize talisman talesman, prerogative presumptive judicature.
    Subpoena parameter perimeter peripherals prophylaxis protocol.
    Real deal seal, sail bail, bailiff rakeness rail.
    Yoni yore yare, leeward lecher leer lingam, menagerie melee hyperbolic milieu thesis, metier quintessential fulham.
    Dangle wrangle mangle jangle tangle angle.
    Hysterically delirious zany nertsy bonkers bluster boggle.
    Gyrate, austere askance obliquely, aspire assail askew.

    Cosmic origins metamorphosis implosion contractions revision, blond entropy catalyst.
    Cataclysm catastrophe holocaust trauma, inefficacy ineffable expiate.
    Chaos cognizant conceive dialectic dictates in extremis extremity meld nuance.
    Cryptic cipher circuit citadel clairvoyant sequitur.
    Cajole fictitious fiery finesse, invoke fulmination gouts clout, curtilage endeavor iterative itinerary.
    Ersatz fiat fulcrum fulgurous indemnify indigenous infernal infidel iniquitous.
    Electroacoustics ciphony Electra complex lore, occipital ubiquity synch.
    Psychosomatic psycokinesis cybernetics, penumbral platitude platonic proxy photics.
    Assimilate stigma perspicacious, astute asunder atman pulchritudinous.

    Decadent arrogant pompously bombastic blatant flagrant chaparral.
    Diabolically maniacal dementia brusque macabre abruptness.
    Swarthy beastly antithetical anathema bestiality belligerent, savvy irate berserkness tirade.
    Ulterior aghast agitator incongruous dire, perdurable peremptory primacy arbitrate zealot.
    Cantankerously sorcerous insidiously sinister alchemizing cauldron, pernicious visceral pathogenic, virulence truculence.
    Ideational hideously horrible horrendously heinous ghastly abysmal abjection.
    Perpetuity pervade rampart ransack oblation erogenous scarp lambent actuarial arbitrage.
    Exserted protuberant pseudopodia actuator, odious aorist militantly mercenary.

    Wingspread wiry wiseacre wherewithal rapacity, implicit important juxtaposition.
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    Ribaldry rigmarole rhubarb, risque rive rollick.
    Demeanor kamikaze kerf, megalomania misanthropies modus operandi genocidal xenophobic.
    Heredity heritage heresy legacy, pseudonym multifarious nefarious nemesis.
    Sepulcher stratagem pantheism parapet paradigm, psychosis neophyte, paragon proselyte.
    Pilferous wheedling finagler, plunderous pillaging usurper, longevous loquacity lottery.
    Rhapsody rhetoric rote raconteur newfangled nocturnal nonchalant sycophant.
    Morose morsel moribund, lurid luscious lyricism lucidity lucrative.
    Creative cleaver crafty cunning furtive sneaky stealthy connive.
    Aphorism euphemism hegira to xanadu carousing maurader syllogism.
    Swell surge flow flux craw crux, virago monad chaos character charisma.
    Heuristic cavalier humeral, meager demonstrative anarchy iconoclasm, apropos ergo ipso-facto.
    Plenary plenipotentiary omniscience presage, omnipotent directive ubiquity emanations.
    Nous agnate ontological ontogeny, exegesis peroration.
    Abeyance, exotically erotic quixotic ecstatically emphatic fanatic.
    Orchestration rendition unicorn railway mainsail, awry askew askance.

    Canny cogent fecund erudite sagacious sequacious conjuring mentality introjection conjugation coercions.
    Avant-garde temporal abstract, scenario synopsis eclectic synectics.
    Synaptic syntax syndrome aspersion, quagmire quandary poshly plush.
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    Mystical silhouette sojourn consortium sabbat conclave liaison, soiree tryst rendezvous symposium excursion compendium.
    Incarnate cephalic phantasmagoria proximity parameter phantasm epitomize transitive transcendental syntactic semantics.
    Resplendent radiant ephemeral effulgence translucent incandescent luster effluence, reflectively refractive azure opulence effusion.
    Contentious pretentiously extravagant eccentric intransigent pedantic antics.
    Guidon guile homogenous hovering imagination immaturity, exogamy incorporeity ideologies.
    Pique poignant piquant puissant quiescence, obstreperously abstruse vagary plausibility's cause.
    Vivid intangible impetus instinct intrigue, livid lurid allusion.
    Autonomous preterite discrepancy amendment emendations, transcendent accession ascensionals in absentia expurgation exculpation.





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      I'm formulating an abstract. I hope it arrives before my birthday.

    P.S. My birthday is 12/21/12 which is always the shortest day for those of us in the northern hemisphere. Might be even shorter this year. :)
    | Posted on 2012-03-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      If you are lonely then why would you write in such a way as it excludes 99% of the audience? It's not like this poem is about some dude taking a walk in the snow, meeting a fork in the road. It's not like it's a short poem; rather, I'd say it's likely to cost your average man or woman hours and hours inside a dictionary and that is not even counting those words he, she, we, would then be forced to look up in order to understand some of those words contained in the definitions.

    To me, poems like this, are like binary code, which is like shorthand for whatever thought you were thinking and the 7 million associated thoughts you went on to think, because you appended some particular meaning to some particular word. That is not a poem, or if it is a poem it is not one accessible to the general populations of the world. This, not to take a potshot at you but, to bring me to the question: isn't the person you are most responsible for pleasing yourself? Then, what would please you most? Then, take your writing to that place.

    And, while that might sound like I'm telling you to push off, it actually means, be most responsible for the joy in your work. Take it to where you believe it will get its just recognition, and who better to judge that than you?

    An interesting exercise would be, for you, to go through this honestly, without adding in too many additional connectors and seeing if it's possible to connect it in a peasant's syntax, like, make it like a story. only, limit yourself to whether it goes together like a story or more like a collection of words you appended a particular meaning to and had a lot of thoughts about.

    If it goes together like a story then maybe present the two versions and interest in the one might develop an interest in or enrich the meaning of the other. If it doesn't go together like a story then, at the very least, it's fair to say it's harder for a person looking in to distinguish that this is a poem.

    i get that, i really do, that one word connects to another, to another, to groupings of words and one in particular, i understand that that is achieved in a number of ways, what i think is that you might be missing the point and the point is (often, but not exclusively). how do you present that in a way that a person could relate?

    that might sound a little rich coming from me, but then, you have to consider who you want to please most, and that should be yourself.
    | Posted on 2012-03-18 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      It certainly kicked my ass. Again.

    I was honestly hoping for a dumbed-down repost...
    But, I sincerely appreciate the hint...
    this puzzle apparently requires some discipline, focus, and mental gymnastics.

    I am sunburned and slightly hung over. Not a state conductive to gymnastics of any kind.

    I'll return at a more opportune time. ;)
    | Posted on 2012-03-18 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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