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    dots Submission Name: Promise Medots
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    Author: unwantedlove20
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 16/12/11
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 547
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    Description:
       well this is me experimenting with rhyming :) While r-reading this poem after I was done, I realized i had matured as a poet, and even as a person.. hope you all enjoyed.


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    dotsPromise Medots
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    You don't have to love me
    You don't have to pretend
    Although this love I have for you
    Is until the very end

    But if you really love me
    And if you really care
    Then stand by me forever
    Show me you'll be there

    Hold me in your arms
    Tell me it's all O.K.
    I'll look up into your eyes
    Never wanting to go away

    Promise me genuine happiness
    Seal that promise with a kiss
    It's amazing how even before you're gone
    It's all of you I miss

    Promise me you're different
    Not like all the other guys
    A relationship based on love and honesty
    Not backstabbing and lies

    Promise me you'll be my friend
    I promise I'll be yours
    We'll stand together hand in hand
    To face what our future stores

    Promise me redemption
    Save me from myself
    Without you I am nothing
    Can't deny it yourself

    Promise me no broken hearts
    Promise me no tears
    Because not having you in my life
    Is the worst of all my fears

    Promise me to keep these promises
    Never let them break
    Because if you walk out one day
    It's my life, heart, and soul you'll take

    -- I Love You




    Submitted on 2012-03-18 17:55:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is very nice :)

    Wish you find the true love who understands what you say :)

    Cheers,
    AbsolutelyLost
    | Posted on 2012-03-19 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]


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