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    dots Submission Name: Youdots
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    Author: Joybell
    ASL Info:    22/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 101/94/56
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Not since you,
    Have I physically hurt just not being with someone
    Not since you,
    Have I gone crazy over the smell of CK ONE
    Not since you,
    Have I gotten wet just holding someone's hand
    Not since you,
    Have I wanted to sex someone so bad in the back of a truck
    Not since you,
    Have I been so innocent
    Not since you,
    Have I regretted so much
    Not since you,
    Have I loved black Grand am's so much
    Not Since you,
    Have I memorized every word someone says
    Not since you,
    Have I enjoyed just being young so much
    Not since you,

    Have I actually felt a part of someone

    Not since you…







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      For all of us there is a special someone; your delightful poem brings forth this....
    most of us loose or part from that special someone, but no one ever takes their place...

    and life goes on..
    but without that special "You"

    Nice reflective write!
    | Posted on 2012-03-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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