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    dots Submission Name: Lift your head updots
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    Author: TalentedChild
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 19/81/106
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLift your head updots
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    For every child who is hurt or let down

    Lift your head up, do not frown

    For every child who's heart has been hurt

    who goes to school hungry or whose face is covered in dirt

    Lift your head up, God will help you.



    For every child who goes to bed without a kiss

    For that one child who's soul goes forgotten, not missed.

    Lift your head up god loves you.



    For every child that was afraid too speak

    Because their voice was too soft and their body was to weak





    For every child with no one to dry the tears

    Lift your head up, God is near.



    For every child whose heart has been broken

    Talk to me about the pain, don't let your voices go unspoken.



    God will watch over you, and help you through,

    and remember We are listening, and we care about you too.



    For every cry a child has shed

    For every young soul that has not been fed

    For every girl or boy that had no where to go

    You are safe now, Just have hope.

    &

    Lift your head up.




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