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    dots Submission Name: Let My Oceans Speakdots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLet My Oceans Speakdots
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    Let my oceans speak, in this versatile world where encumberments are falling in pasteurizing waters, while sipping curdles in the felling of their conch shells.

    The omniscient dunes, with their sidewinding trails now conditionally express an obvious infidelity - but only when a binderís world clasping comes undone and the pages beseech.

    Then the moisture of the blotting sea ruminates while a squid swims with enmity.

    Besides; there was only a boa, and not a whisper in the omniscient dunes, with a sidewinders trail.





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