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I'm not really a poet, just an angsty sonofagun.


Honey, sweetie, baby, I'm broken
And I hope someone breaks you too

Submitted on 2012-03-21 05:04:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  As they say, what goes around, comes around. I'm sure the person that broke your heart will get their comeuppance.

While I read this little ditty, I somehow conjured up in my minds eye the video by Christina Perri, "Jar of Hearts".

I sometimes wonder why people do things that leave other people feeling broken and disconnected. Maybe they are selfish? Maybe they like to see other people hurting? Or maybe, just maybe...they want you to learn something (as was, I'm sure, not their initial plan - but who knows).

I digress...thank you for sharing (something personal)...

Take care,

| Posted on 2012-04-01 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]
  if you ever get a chance to pull it up on youtube there was an old hit by del shannon called "hats off to larry"--

it relates to this little ditty...very well...

"hats off to the guy who broke your heart!"

| Posted on 2012-03-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
  What is it said that loves company? I like the twist here.
| Posted on 2012-03-21 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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