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    dots Submission Name: Pigments of imaginationdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPigments of imaginationdots
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    I tell you that we are all magicians, causing changes through minds effect focused and nurtured with the kindling of an innate knowing that illusions can bend to willful whispers.

    Let me smite the conceptions you hold so dear with talons of knowledge to release the understanding of magic and its workings so you can return to your core unhindered with new meaning.

    Describe your mentality in frequent passings as you diminish the steps of separation between the shell and being, see the colors rise.
    Feel what I feel as you drink it all in.

    I need you in this world to share the warmth of a true offering, allow me into your seams, I need your caress to polish my journey with new meanings so that perhaps I could be left as a pure reflection embracing you with new found needs to complete dreams and forgotten things.

    Allow me this.

    Svw




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      poets with innate knowing...magicians? maybe in some way---we make inner feelings appear on the page...poets tell it like it is..sometimes smite conceptions..

    but usually tell it with honesty...yet we need the readers as much as they need us..."share the warmth of the offering"

    nice poets' offering here.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-03-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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