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    Author: thesunbird
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 198/19/19
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    It is all of the struggle, to lift myself
    off this warehouse floor.
    to say

    "thank you -i appreciated the job." to recommend me,
    the throwing of cases, standing, on hours,
    on queue.
    ____________________
    And then, to sit in front of this computer, my neck,
    bending, bent to you. in that same way.




    Submitted on 2012-03-25 08:08:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      and yet one will contort into the oddest shapes to try to scratch an itch there...


    I'm still liking the equation format. A literal summing up in structure.
    | Posted on 2012-09-02 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      you cannot reach the middle of your back.
    | Posted on 2012-03-25 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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