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    Author: Eadyzgal
    ASL Info:    19/Female/Northants
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/1/4
    Words: 322
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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       For my man


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    Andrew Eady <3
    by Claire Cochrane on Wednesday, 9 February 2011 at 00:27

    There are times I have let you down or made you mad



    I cant control these thoughts that make me sad



    I thought that if I lost you my world would be shattered



    No one else in this life has truly mattered



    The way you just look at me with those eyes



    My stomach flutters going mad like a thousand butterflies



    So when I scream or shout out loud at you



    Know deep down I would be lost without you



    So I am sorry if I make you lose your temper



    Even when your angry please remember



    That I love you with all my heart



    Dont let silly arguments tear us apart



    I love the way you say silly things to me



    I love how you make me feel like I am somebody



    Before you I was in this dark place all alone



    Then we met and in your heart I felt at home



    There are small things that make us annoyed with each other



    Then we talk and its better your like my best friend not just my lover



    But you aint my lover, your my everything and more



    Your my beautiful man who I adore



    We been together over a year and been through so much together



    With you by my side it hurts less I will love you forever




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