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    dots Submission Name: This ones for you dots

    Author: Eadyzgal
    ASL Info:    19/Female/Northants
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/1/4
    Words: 322
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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       For my man

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    dotsThis ones for you dots

    Andrew Eady <3
    by Claire Cochrane on Wednesday, 9 February 2011 at 00:27

    There are times I have let you down or made you mad

    I cant control these thoughts that make me sad

    I thought that if I lost you my world would be shattered

    No one else in this life has truly mattered

    The way you just look at me with those eyes

    My stomach flutters going mad like a thousand butterflies

    So when I scream or shout out loud at you

    Know deep down I would be lost without you

    So I am sorry if I make you lose your temper

    Even when your angry please remember

    That I love you with all my heart

    Dont let silly arguments tear us apart

    I love the way you say silly things to me

    I love how you make me feel like I am somebody

    Before you I was in this dark place all alone

    Then we met and in your heart I felt at home

    There are small things that make us annoyed with each other

    Then we talk and its better your like my best friend not just my lover

    But you aint my lover, your my everything and more

    Your my beautiful man who I adore

    We been together over a year and been through so much together

    With you by my side it hurts less I will love you forever

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