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    dots Submission Name: Cause Now It's 3amdots
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    Author: janekostman09
    Elite Ratio:    1.55 - 96/54/44
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsCause Now It's 3amdots
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    I've been struck by the pain of past memories
    that haunt me.
    While I'm traped in this darkness.

    Oh -- don't you know that I'm
    lost wondering how to get away,
    and if i can escape.

    Cause now its 3 am and I'm still awake
    waiting untill possiblityes stop fading,
    and pretending comes to an end
    In this world I'm living in

    just like this nightmear when it began..
    just like this nightmear when it began.

    Oh its so hard staying silent
    and not saying how I feel.
    I'll keep wishing our freindship was'nt over...
    But just knowing what you think of me....
    and how we won't ever be real close.....

    Brings me back to reality..

    Cause now its 3 am and I'm still awake
    waiting untill possiblityes stop fading,
    and pretending comes to an end.
    in this world I'm living in

    just like this nightmear when it began..
    just like this nightmear when it began.

    Oh-------Woee woeee-----ohh ohh
    Can't you see what I see or is there not a
    way to get over the past
    or is it that you will always keep making excuses...

    Cause now its 3 am and I'm still awake
    waiting untill possiblityes stop fading,
    and pretending comes to an end
    in this world I'm living in.

    just like this nightmear when it began..
    just like this nightmear when it began.

    Cause.....it's 3am....








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