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    Author: Rainwater
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    gone /gôn/
    adj.
    1. departed; left.
    2. lost or hopeless.
    3. ruined.
    4. that has passed away; dead.




    Submitted on 2012-03-27 04:37:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you left me broken hearted, now you are "gone"

    meaning deceased, dead to me--you are hopelessly lost and i will never again try to help you find yourself.

    you will only find yourself "without me" from now on.

    so as we used to say in Jersey when i was a kid...."get bent."

    i like the irony here.
    all of those nice definitions for what i really want to say.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-03-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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