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Author:	Rainwater
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gone /gôn/
adj.
1. departed; left.
2. lost or hopeless.
3. ruined.
4. that has passed away; dead.

Submitted on 2012-03-27 04:37:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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you left me broken hearted, now you are "gone"

meaning deceased, dead to me--you are hopelessly lost and i will never again try to help you find yourself.

you will only find yourself "without me" from now on.

so as we used to say in Jersey when i was a kid...."get bent."

i like the irony here.
all of those nice definitions for what i really want to say.

jacob
| Posted on 2012-03-27 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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