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    Author: sarosh
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    change is always difficult to accept,,,but its most difficult when you cant find the reason of others change




    Submitted on 2012-03-27 04:46:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hello,

    i like this. it is simple and resonates with me, as being true.

    my one suggestion is to introduce punctuation, for example:

    'change is always difficult to accept... but it's most difficult when you can't find the reason of other's change.'

    anyway, good job ;)




    | Posted on 2012-04-01 00:00:00 | by biska | [ Reply to This ]


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