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I wrote this when I kept on having dreams about my brother Michael who passed away in April 2004
Just a dream
I saw your face in front of me last night
You looked so happy not a sign of pain in sight
You reached out your hand to me as I woke
I looked up at you in disbelief as you spoke
Were it truly you or was it just a dream
I sat up from my pillow was everything what it may seem
Some how this all seemed so real
Your brotherly arms around me I could feel
I see your same old cheeky grin and loving smile
I was just so happy you have came to see me for a while
We went to the park and you pushed me on a swing
Then we sat around and began to sing
It was amazing to have you back in my life
Then you blew a kiss & disappeared I felt a pain in my heart like a knife
I fell to my knees screaming out to you
I felt weak when you left with nothing I could do
Then I felt tears down my face and a pillow I could see
What happened was not real you just came to my dreams for me
Realization had sunk in you really are not here
I wish my dreams were real because there you were near
What I would give to just hear your voice again that I love
However that's not possible as your now just an angel above
Submitted on 2012-03-27 06:31:56
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@janekostman09 Thank you so much my brother was more than just a brother to me he was my hero, my best friend and I miss him more with each passing day and my poems were my way of expressing my pain and I just hope others enjoy reading them :)
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