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    dots Submission Name: Just a dreamdots

    Author: Eadyzgal
    ASL Info:    19/Female/Northants
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/1/4
    Words: 260
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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       I wrote this when I kept on having dreams about my brother Michael who passed away in April 2004

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    dotsJust a dreamdots

    I saw your face in front of me last night

    You looked so happy not a sign of pain in sight

    You reached out your hand to me as I woke

    I looked up at you in disbelief as you spoke

    Were it truly you or was it just a dream

    I sat up from my pillow was everything what it may seem

    Some how this all seemed so real

    Your brotherly arms around me I could feel

    I see your same old cheeky grin and loving smile

    I was just so happy you have came to see me for a while

    We went to the park and you pushed me on a swing

    Then we sat around and began to sing

    It was amazing to have you back in my life

    Then you blew a kiss & disappeared I felt a pain in my heart like a knife

    I fell to my knees screaming out to you

    I felt weak when you left with nothing I could do

    Then I felt tears down my face and a pillow I could see

    What happened was not real you just came to my dreams for me

    Realization had sunk in you really are not here

    I wish my dreams were real because there you were near

    What I would give to just hear your voice again that I love

    However that's not possible as your now just an angel above

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      @janekostman09 Thank you so much my brother was more than just a brother to me he was my hero, my best friend and I miss him more with each passing day and my poems were my way of expressing my pain and I just hope others enjoy reading them :)
    | Posted on 2012-04-16 00:00:00 | by Eadyzgal | [ Reply to This ]
      very insprational....
    | Posted on 2012-03-29 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]

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