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    dots Submission Name: In heaven some daydots

    Author: Eadyzgal
    ASL Info:    19/Female/Northants
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/1/4
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Another poem for my brother Michael he passed away in April 2004, 8 days before my 12th birthday he was a big part of my life that will always leave a gap in my heart. Love you bro x

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    dotsIn heaven some daydots

    No longer do you smile at me or say to me good night

    You are an angel in the sky or a star that shines so bright

    I cant hear you speak my name now only a voice in my head

    I miss you so much now that you are dead

    I was too young to know why you were sad

    Or understand why small things made you mad

    I will never hear your voice again not even your hello

    Or get to kiss you good bye when you had to go

    You will never dry my tears again when I am feeling blue

    When all I really want is just a hug from you

    We cant have our movie nights or have a sing along

    Instead I just cry sad tears when the radio plays your song

    I cant rely on memories of how things used to be

    Because my dear brother you were took too soon from me

    I think I remember how your voice used to sound

    Thats not good enough when we need you around

    I wish that I could just talk to you when I look up to the sky

    But then I'd just breakdown as I get no reply

    I dream that you answer me and tell me your okay

    I hope that we will meet again in heaven some day &#65279;

    Miss you bro!

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