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    dots Submission Name: It is clear to medots

    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIt is clear to medots

    It is clear to me, I found the reasoning.
    Why I fall victim every time to the pain.
    It is familiar to me, so I return yet again.
    I feel my heart aching, it's weakening.

    Soon it will be broken once more, humbled.
    This pain I know, it's been my friend before.
    Holding my hand while my hearts ripped and tore.
    Soon the pain subsides, on my feet, I stumble.

    I walk away from it once more, sure to return.
    His love is venom, it runs in my veins, killing.
    Though I am no victim, I need it, I am willing.
    So back to his love I go, no heed, no concern.

    Submitted on 2012-03-28 09:50:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm a recovering alcoholic, and I understand the message in this poem. Something in human nature makes us return to some things that we know are bad for us...

    I am vividly reminded that the gal I fell the hardest for dealt me the most pain and misery..

    Well versed poem!
    | Posted on 2012-03-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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