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    dots Submission Name: My Insidesdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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       I wrote what was inside me


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    dotsMy Insidesdots
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    A bound flower
    Set on fire
    Thin thorns that stick
    Flames are bust
    Set on the cross
    Just to watch
    And heart to heart
    Lies are driven
    By the insides count
    Yet mind had bitten
    So lives are crushed
    And erased from existence
    Calling all oafs
    As springs are tinted




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