Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: The knight of Navara Revisiteddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: McClune2
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 495
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1049



    Description:
       Coming back to where I started


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe knight of Navara Revisiteddots
    -------------------------------------------


    Six years ago, I started a story. But, not only did I start a story. I created a world, a place that I have made my own. Six years ago, the world of Navara was born, and I think that now is the time that I come back to finish what I have started.
    Over these few years, the world I created has expanded. Expanded into something massive, and has almost taken on a life of its own. The Knight of Navara. I have returned to what I made, and I am here to finish it.
    I feel that, when I started this before, I was approaching the story from the wrong direction. I really did not know too much about how to form a good story. The early drafts just didn't have that power that I was searching for, the drive to continue on with the legacy.
    I believe, I now have what it takes to make The Knight of Navara a true legend.


    The Knight of Navara follows the story of Aries. He is a bit naive, but also brave and strong. The series will take us through his life, from its humble beginnings to his infinite destiny.




    Submitted on 2012-03-31 02:51:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    194771

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Silent Screams In Silent Dreams written by poetotoe
    Records I written by Raphael
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Yes written by poetotoe
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Formal Jen written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Fasade written by jackz
    an unashamed poverty written by Daniel Barlow
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    descent written by TheBadSadMan

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry