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    dots Submission Name: The knight of Navara Revisiteddots
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    Author: McClune2
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       Coming back to where I started


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    Six years ago, I started a story. But, not only did I start a story. I created a world, a place that I have made my own. Six years ago, the world of Navara was born, and I think that now is the time that I come back to finish what I have started.
    Over these few years, the world I created has expanded. Expanded into something massive, and has almost taken on a life of its own. The Knight of Navara. I have returned to what I made, and I am here to finish it.
    I feel that, when I started this before, I was approaching the story from the wrong direction. I really did not know too much about how to form a good story. The early drafts just didn't have that power that I was searching for, the drive to continue on with the legacy.
    I believe, I now have what it takes to make The Knight of Navara a true legend.


    The Knight of Navara follows the story of Aries. He is a bit naive, but also brave and strong. The series will take us through his life, from its humble beginnings to his infinite destiny.




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