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    dots Submission Name: A Happy Onedots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Happy Onedots
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    Man, it's quite hard,
    To write when I'm so happy.
    Instead of intense abstract art,
    All I'm getting is sweet and sappy.

    Fuel comes from the pain,
    But nothing brings me down tonight,
    'Cause all I feel is love,
    Especially under the soft moonlight.

    I'm all smiles, and a writer's block,
    But who fucking cares?
    The world seems way better than normal,
    Just something I wanted to share.




    Submitted on 2012-03-31 23:23:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Funny how each of us finds the fuel for our work in different emotions, moods, or situations. The beauty of what you have written here is that you just don't have the words to describe what you're feeling...and to me, that is the best sort of poetry. What a wonderful feeling that is...

    Enjoy!

    K
    | Posted on 2012-04-01 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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