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    dots Submission Name: Password 2012dots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1556/457/118
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPassword 2012dots
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    stars - hide
    moon - blush
    sky - flash
    thunder - roll
    blaze - rampant
    smoke - rise
    ash - fall
    music - dim
    pale - fade
    covenant - dissolve
    desolation born
    Jesus




    Submitted on 2012-04-01 16:24:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice work here, I like the way you wrote this, I like stuff about stars & the end. xo pioneerheart
    | Posted on 2012-10-14 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]
      At first I thought this was just some sort of word-association game. Took me a minute to realize the 'story' behind it. Interesting. Not my cup of tea, poetically, but kind of cool nonetheless.
    | Posted on 2012-04-04 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ]
      Very clever...I like it. I the closure (or is it a beginning)...the password to end all passwords. The keys to the kingdom...is it really as simple as believing (with all of your being)? Could I live a life devoid of belief (and be a complete scondrel), and then on my death bed suddenly have the revelation (and the will power) to believe...and be allowed in??? Does it really work so easily???

    With very few words, you have sparked questions that many of us struggle with daily...

    Thank you for sharing!

    Kelly
    | Posted on 2012-04-03 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]
      Dire predictions Lloyd.
    | Posted on 2012-04-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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