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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 297
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    I found my heart,

    In despot,

    I sought my soul,

    Watched it go down the drain real slow,

    Look into my eyes,

    Filled with remorse,

    Hoping life takes a better course,

    Stranded at sea,

    Blind as can be,

    No one willing to rescue me,

    Screaming in pain,

    Agony reigns,

    Who owns my heart,

    Simply because I let him set it ablaze,

    Hell breached,

    Maximum depression reached,

    Every turn and every avenue,

    Closed to me,

    Signs reading Fuck you

    No light in sight,

    Empty readings of love,

    Look to the stars and heavens above,

    Trying to find happiness in this deep sorrow,

    Knowing that there is no tomorrow,

    I live for today,

    I hope and I pray,

    That everything will maybe be okay,

    Anger from within,

    Growing very thin,

    Every instant Im alone,

    The world grows even more cold,

    No hope in my mind,

    All dust in the wind,

    The only innocents left in the world,

    Is that of the kids,

    Its rotting away,

    Causing migraines,

    No more happiness to be shown,

    I think I should just go.




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