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    dots Submission Name: Most Brutal Heartdots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMost Brutal Heartdots
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    I love this man with all my heart,

    But his anger is making me wish I could depart,

    I feel so empty and alone,

    Whenever he is playing a game,

    Or texting on someones phone,

    I look into his eyes and see affection,

    But his actions scream rejection,

    I love him so much,

    But how much abuse is enough?

    Everyday I wake next to him,

    My chances of losing him are extremely slim,

    But When I think to myself,

    The thought pops into my head,

    That Iíve found hell,

    Iíve searched for him high and low,

    Ever since the day he was forced to go,

    But time changes people,

    This I now know,

    So should I stay,

    Should I depart?

    What I ask you,

    Should I do?

    I just donít want to harbor a broken heart.




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