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Author: eowyn
ASL Info:    23/f/australia
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There is NOTHING litterary about this. No form. No editing. Just straight out spitting my thoughts onto the computer. Just gotta get it out today.


There is nothing I can't put into words
but this has me fumbling.
I am happy. Sad. Lost. Confused.
I want to say its for the better. That I can cope
But my mind betrays me
every night, I Hope.
I want to say I'm sorry. To beg on my knees.
I want to be silent. Forever be alone.
Crying in my pillow. Lost. Lost. It's all Lost.
I want YOU to comfort me. Without seeing my pain.
I think to you, I'm sorry. But I really am to proud to say it.
And now I'm mad. You should read my thoughts.
I shouldn't have to explain.
Why can't you hear my heart? Why aren't you here?

Submitted on 2012-04-04 05:58:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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