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    dots Submission Name: Leaf On A Breezedots
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    Author: DearlyDeparted
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    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsLeaf On A Breezedots
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    Forget;
    ----Forgive;
    -----Let go.
    Like the leaf of a tree....~~~>>

    Learn;
    ----Love;
    ----Live.
    ~~~>>....Carelessly carried off by the wind.

    Live to forget
    ....Love to forgive
    .....Learn to let go..




    Submitted on 2012-04-06 21:44:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, yes....live to forget.

    sometimes it is hard to live to love...because we have loved too many times with bad results...

    and letting go of the branch as a leaf can be difficult...we want to hang onto it with all our might...not let go of the past, not forget...

    and then a wind blows us away from ourselves...and we look inside and say "why?"

    why not let go? do we have to wait till our autumn...die on the tree, never experiencing the flight from letting go, drifting with life not fighting against it?

    so true so true, this piece is words well spent.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-04-07 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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