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    dots Submission Name: NaPoWriMo: April 6thdots

    Author: EmpathicAya
    ASL Info:    13+8/unMale/Your Mind
    Elite Ratio:    7.31 - 700/456/109
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Haha, I'm going for the challenge, saartha!

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    dotsNaPoWriMo: April 6thdots

    Attempts to have my thoughts
    toward one another
    to form one coherent unit
    that drops from my mouth
    onto paper,
    to make an understandable idea.

    My Rorschach test.

    Submitted on 2012-04-06 22:54:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked how this was bunched and then that was left behind by the action, what you described, the poem did, exactly. I thought that was plumb.
    | Posted on 2012-04-14 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
    I like how this reads as a run-on sentence, kinda makes it more tense & ups the feeling of frustration. I think everyone has been here who tries to write; just wanting so bad to get something clear down on paper & finally when you do, especially with poetry, well there's so much another person can miss regardless of how clear & precise it is to you. It's your Rorschach test.

    Keep attempting! I look froward to more NatPo poems from both of you!
    | Posted on 2012-04-08 00:00:00 | by Santi | [ Reply to This ]
      i think perhaps coherency comes for writers...often clarity others don't quite find---the transference of words from mouth or mind --to paper---

    there is understanding!

    you've written all of us into this.

    | Posted on 2012-04-07 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Inspiring... I like that! I made an immediate connect to Pavlov's dog. So much drivel that takes form, hopefully. The magic of the Rorschach test is that we can make something out of nothing, but apparently the first hurdle is to come up with some kind of nothing to start with. Why is even that much so often harder than we think?
    | Posted on 2012-04-07 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Hahaha, yessss. All will join me in my suffering.

    A Rorschach test is actually a really good description of NaPo! This sort of day-after-day view into someone's thoughts can be so enlightening. The world is a giant ink blot, let's see what you make of it in the coming days.

    | Posted on 2012-04-06 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ]

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