Grammar/spelling issues: other's = others. Tale a = Tale I. Concience = conscience.
Though, did you really mean 'conscience'? As in, your sense of morality? Because it doesn't really make sense in this situation. Perhaps you meant 'consciousness'.
The lack of any sort of poetic technique in this is off-putting, and makes for a dull read. There's little here to critique, it reads more like a kid's diary than a poem. The message is shallow, and the writing is unimaginative. What was your intent while writing this?