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    dots Submission Name: Salacious dots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1083/406/116
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Rant/Satire
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    dotsSalacious dots
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    "Surreal skeptic, cynical cryptic! Licentious lecheries fabulist facade fantasias. Wild eyed spectral serene. Dream of catenary concoctions, ethereal salacious conjugation, bridge the gap in metaphysical mystique. Erotica erectile errantry's exserted protuberance is a kinesiology kleptomaniac with his embark embargo extraditions and his eventuation evocative execrations, a positive amalgamated anathema android of a terminus thrall. The shadow in the shade of the silhouette sojourn. The bailiff's rakeness rails incarnate, unicorn railway nails and all. He will paint mirador bartizan panorama tableaus all over your proximity parameter perimeter peripherals. Force the enmity to acquiesce into impunity." "Why this is not but an ogling ogre of an oligarchy omelet" she shrieked as he continued to tickle her. "Down here at the bizarre bazaar we all believe in the blasphemous farcical fugueness," he said. "Positive orchestration renditions of transpositional interlude." "Come here," she said "let my clambering clamorous clangor write you a wield wile treatise expose. The legions of Chinga da are battling the hoards of Gunga din saying kinetic supremacy temporize tractive fluent , it's sheer genocide. That plasty goop nosed Gumby fucker Gunga doesn't stand a chance. Coax cacophony clout, catatonic phonics, grizzly grotto grouches all", She squealed. "Now you're gumption dreaming," he chimed. "Chutzpah panache spontaneous generation complicity, gambit alluvium aloof succor."




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      I was only interested in your form piled high like dung.

    "Surreal skeptic, cynical cryptic!
    Licentious lecheries fabulist facade fantasias.
    Wild eyed spectral serene. Dream of catenary concoctions,
    ethereal salacious conjugation, bridge the gap in metaphysical mystique.

    Erotica erectile errantry's exserted protuberance is a kinesiology kleptomaniac with
    his embark embargo extraditions and his eventuation evocative execrations, a positive amalgamated anathema android of a terminus thrall.

    The shadow in the shade of the silhouette sojourn.
    The bailiff's rakeness rails incarnate, unicorn railway nails and all.
    He will paint mirador bartizan panorama tableaus all over your proximity parameter perimeter peripherals. Force the enmity to acquiesce into impunity."

    "Why this is not but an ogling ogre of an oligarchy omelet" she shrieked as he continued to tickle her. "Down here at the bizarre bazaar we all believe in the blasphemous farcical fugueness," he said. "Positive orchestration renditions of transpositional interlude."

    "Come here," she said "let my clambering clamorous clangor write you a wield wile treatise expose. The legions of Chinga da are battling the hoards of Gunga din saying kinetic supremacy temporize tractive fluent , it's sheer genocide. That plasty goop nosed Gumby fucker Gunga doesn't stand a chance.

    Coax cacophony clout, catatonic phonics, grizzly grotto grouches all", She squealed.
    "Now you're gumption dreaming," he chimed. "Chutzpah panache spontaneous generation complicity, gambit alluvium aloof succor."
    | Posted on 2013-07-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Salacious, delicious and vivacious! Oh yea Monad, this piece just soothed my appetite. "Dream of catenary concoctions" yes, yes... Love the wordy meal it was a plate filled with a fairytale within a fairytale for me.

    AljX
    | Posted on 2012-05-07 00:00:00 | by TangledInDreams | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it when you talk dirty. It goes quite fast, could it be "fast talk"? : to influence or persuade by fluent, facile, and usually deceptive or tricky talk <fast–talked him into buying a lemon> ... could be. Could this be different if broken down into stanzas/paragraphs? Perhaps. Perhaps it would not be such a big pill to swallow. Would that be the the bird or the verb? I often feel like the bird but never so adept at flying as those guys. Swift darting, kind of like the verbage here. But is a swift kind of a swallow, these two birds? It appears not, even if they appear similar. But if we combine swift and swallow, are we talking birds or back to talking dirty... I hear swifts seldom land on the ground, interesting. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swift
    | Posted on 2012-04-21 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      i could follow this pretty well...and enjoyed the feeling i got from it...and as a poet, related to "catatonic phonics"

    life is proximity to the salacious words we write...and when they have intercourse, we feel one with the poems and the poems are our life.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-04-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Is this your version of sexting? It certainly has salacious elements, and the "proximity parameter perimeter peripherals" and "bizarre bazzar" sound a lot like the internet and its interactive nature.

    I appreciate the scattering of subjects and verbs among the varied and very verbose detailed descriptions you are so gregariously given to give. It helps a reader to follow along a bit better.
    | Posted on 2012-04-08 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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