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Miss you


Author: Lynda
ASL Info:    26/F
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Love holidays.... hate saying goodbye at the end of them.


Miss you



Sorry for rushing out so fast
But if I drag it out I know I’ll cry
It’s easier to pack up and run
Than it is to kiss and say goodbye

I thought that I would grow out of this
But you were right, as you’ve always been
Homesickness isn't just for kids
You told me it would be hard again and again

When I become a mother, mom
And my children grow up and move away
I’ll have to remind them all along
That they’re going to miss me bad one day

Because as I’ve learned the past few years
When I come home again to say hello
Even though I’m older now
It still hurts when it’s time to go




Submitted on 2012-04-09 15:59:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  "Home, they say, is where the heart is", and indeed they're right. This delightful poem brought familiar recollections to us all, and it was written with warmth and artistry.

Thank you for sharing it with us.
| Posted on 2012-04-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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