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    dots Submission Name: One Daydots
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    Author: eowyn
    ASL Info:    23/f/australia
    Elite Ratio:    5.34 - 238/174/86
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 625
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    Bytes: 369



    Description:
       Just me saying what I need to say. That no one will let me say because "it's his loss". Yes. ONE DAY it will be.


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    dotsOne Daydots
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    One day you'll realise:
    that anyone can chat from dusk 'till dawn
    Anyone can make blood boil, with the right words
    Anyone can smile coyly, blush on command
    anyone can text late at night "I love YOU"
    But one day you'll also know
    that I am not anybody. And on that day
    You'll miss me.




    Submitted on 2012-04-10 05:53:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      To thine own self be true - Shakespeare
    | Posted on 2012-04-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      reminds me a bit of emily dickinson...
    "i am nobody, are you nobody too?"

    although she really meant the opposite...i am somebody...recognize me.

    notice me.

    we take each other for granted so often, and really don't know what we have until it is gone.

    then all we do is remember what we should have thought more of to begin with.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-04-11 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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