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Yogurt Rules!

Author: Blue Monk
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Another step on the long road of poet marathon.

Yogurt Rules!

Living healthy eating living
active culture culture
if rather it was dead you said
then you must be a vulture

Little bugs that you ingest
to healthy diet follow
give it naught too much a thought
so you may freely swallow

For these are of a friendly kind
to make your tummy happy
when they hold sway they make your day
while others make you crappy

Submitted on 2012-04-10 13:35:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i love this! Its so playful in word and spirit.
| Posted on 2013-03-31 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]
  i love yogurt a lot and this just show your ability to find inspiration everywhere..clever and inspiring as well.

| Posted on 2012-08-31 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
  I thought of this poem all afternoon while listening to NPR:

those bugs are amazing, really...
| Posted on 2012-06-15 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
  Hooray for probiotics! Although, it is a kinda creepy idea to be eating 'good bugs'.
Clever little ditty....
one that proves you can find inspiration anywhere!
| Posted on 2012-04-15 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
  ingesting little bugs that make me happy not crappy...

i do love yogurt!

uh huh!
| Posted on 2012-04-11 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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