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    dots Submission Name: Yogurt Rules!dots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1547/457/118
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYogurt Rules!dots
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    Living healthy eating living
    active culture culture
    if rather it was dead you said
    then you must be a vulture

    Little bugs that you ingest
    to healthy diet follow
    give it naught too much a thought
    so you may freely swallow

    For these are of a friendly kind
    to make your tummy happy
    when they hold sway they make your day
    while others make you crappy




    Submitted on 2012-04-10 13:35:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this! Its so playful in word and spirit.
    | Posted on 2013-03-31 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]
      i love yogurt a lot and this just show your ability to find inspiration everywhere..clever and inspiring as well.

    jen
    | Posted on 2012-08-31 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought of this poem all afternoon while listening to NPR:

    http://www.radiolab.org/2012/apr/02/?utm_source=local&utm_media=treatment&utm_campaign=daMost&utm_content=damostviewed

    http://www.podtrac.com/pts/redirect.mp3/traffic.libsyn.com/sciencefriday/scifri20120615-hr1.mp3


    those bugs are amazing, really...
    | Posted on 2012-06-15 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      Hooray for probiotics! Although, it is a kinda creepy idea to be eating 'good bugs'.
    Clever little ditty....
    one that proves you can find inspiration anywhere!
    | Posted on 2012-04-15 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      ingesting little bugs that make me happy not crappy...

    i do love yogurt!

    uh huh!
    | Posted on 2012-04-11 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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