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Clear beautiful thoughts!!

Author: Damien Vladimir
ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
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Clear beautiful thoughts!!

Oh what a beautiful day
what lovely afternoon...
reliving in my head the hypnotic sounds,
of accussations being heard,
being held at the Nuremberg trials,...

...and all the while the shrilling cries of horror!
Blaring uncertainty from the east.
In the land of the Three.
Northern Imperial Palaces,
give rise to torment and malaise;
Which bring predictions of a cold night.

Submitted on 2012-04-10 19:15:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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