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    dots Submission Name: I'm the lucky onedots
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    Author: Joybell
    ASL Info:    22/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 101/94/56
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI'm the lucky onedots
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    I知 the lucky one, to be marrying you in 39 days.
    I知 the lucky one to have this relationship every day
    I知 the lucky one to be able to call you mine at night.

    Your work takes you far, so just know you are in my heart.
    I知 the lucky one, because I know someday I will get to bear your son.

    I知 the lucky one that you find in me, someone you want to see when you wake up next to me.
    I知 the lucky one that you are so smart and motivated and make sure to plan ahead so that you can always take care of me and the roof over our heads.

    You wipe away the past, and push me to chase what痴 next.
    I知 the lucky one, my love for you is not based on your looks or how you treat me on your 堵ood days
    I知 the lucky one to know we will fight, but always stay.
    I知 the lucky one, as you support me when I知 down and encourage me when I知 up.
    I知 the lucky one that I feel so much for you; it drives me to write something new.

    I知 the lucky one, and I hope you know, that mere words will never do.
    So when you read this, I hope you know I will have to try and show you the rest,
    The very best of my love.




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