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    dots Submission Name: Lazy Afternoondots
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    Author: MonsterMonster
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 6/11/12
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 546
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    dotsLazy Afternoondots
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    Just sitting,
    allowing all creativity to leave,
    allowing time to waste away,
    as I, surely, waste away
    with it.
    Nothing to entertain,
    but Mr. Dylan,
    iced tea,
    and these keys.
    I am all but a musically inclined artist,
    playing the keys of a different instrument,
    as time ticks on and on.




    Submitted on 2012-04-16 19:13:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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