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    dots Submission Name: i need to rundots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 424
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    Bytes: 450



    Description:
       Same guy how far under my skin has he reached in such few short days and why?


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    dotsi need to rundots
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    Ripped my heart out
    and make me bleed
    Say your sorry
    And such sweet thoughts
    The cut gets deeper
    Do I let you continue
    Or stop you
    I want to listen
    And I want
    To scream at you
    To stop
    To many memories
    And feelings
    I thought I forgot
    you brought them back
    With very few words
    You read me so easily
    Should I stay
    or run away?




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