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    dots Submission Name: Devil's Dictionary dots

    Author: nikita2u
    ASL Info:    26 Female Wonderlandlust
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 404/396/239
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I had waaaaay to much free time back then

    Monday January 5th 2009

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    dotsDevil's Dictionary dots

    The aggression of dissidence
    is to decry our brothers and sisters.
    We deprave the deprecated murderer
    of his disposition. Fallen within delusion
    that the disease and decay of bottom
    feeders in society rests on our door steps.

    We eliminate the staring by stander for
    his eccentricities, because he doesn't walk the
    beaten path, as we cater to the
    eradication of populations over seas.
    Thus we sit in classrooms enumerating the
    many problems of today's exasperating
    condescending legal systems.

    The validation children seek, they who walk among
    the veiled and vicarious therapist. Thrown
    into the vicinity of insanity, they
    wallow in self righteous anger fueled by
    variously vicious marketed propaganda.

    We identify with idealists who display the
    traits of inhumanity while portraying
    injudicious behavior towards those around
    them. Insinuatingly we institutionalize paradigms
    and inaugurate within the younger
    instrumental minds bringing upon instantaneous
    cultist devolution.

    Loathing the facts of today's lambasted like
    leaders. Livid living from day to day carrying
    the lead weights of societies drudgery.
    Laboring through thickets of indiscretion,
    televised perversity as law makers bend
    their own rules. Hence, we swim in the latrines
    and display to those above and beneath
    how we are forever damned.

    Submitted on 2012-04-17 15:48:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      what an image..."we swim in latrines"

    quite a profound piece of writing...hinting at the depth of society's downfall...and we will all claim that nothing is wrong...ah the devil's work.

    we don't even see our own demise.

    the alliteration works well here.

    | Posted on 2012-04-17 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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