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    dots Submission Name: unspokendots

    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       Once again to my mystery man but I'm going to take his user name and change it slightly for me and he is now known as my beautiful darkness

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    You held me while I cried
    And wiped away
    the tears you saw
    You made me laugh
    And made me smile
    You kissed away the pain
    And held me tight
    maybe not all through the night
    But sometimes it don't take that
    Feelings don't need to be told
    Neither of us is ready
    For this to end
    will we ever?
    Only time will tell
    If it helps any
    I wont give you
    My heart when its broken
    something's go unspoken though
    We are dangerous together
    but you can't go threw life
    Without taking risks

    Submitted on 2012-04-18 11:59:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I absolutely love this, it does not speak to me but screams to me. I feel every word of this poem, love love love it! Thanks for writing it.
    | Posted on 2012-04-18 00:00:00 | by PrettyHeart | [ Reply to This ]
      Signs of true and immaculate love which only fortunate people get. Love brings pain with it. But it is worth it. Go for it. Follow your heart and the way of your life to your love will be paved.
    | Posted on 2012-04-18 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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