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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 496
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    Description:
       To my beautiful darkness


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    I would have rather
    loved you then lost you
    Then to have never
    Loved you at all
    I need someone to show me
    What real love
    Is supposed to be like
    But how can I ask you
    To put yourself
    In that position
    you say you like to help people
    But would that be to much
    It would be so easy
    To fall for you
    You asked last night
    If I was going to someone else
    I don't think I could do that
    I know we are not together
    But I think my mind/thoughts
    Have done crossed that line
    Without my permission
    I told you before
    I've never cheated on anyone
    So why start now
    I know I shouldn't feel this way
    But I can't help that I do




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