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    dots Submission Name: Wrapped in our armsdots
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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 62/89/71
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWrapped in our armsdots
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    I love the way that every morning,
    I wake up in your arms;
    like even if you weren't there-
    you'd be dreaming that you are.
    I love I can kiss your lips;
    love the way you kiss mine too,
    because these were the lips I have waited to kiss;
    waited my whole life for you.
    I even love the way you move,
    you could just stand there.
    I love every part of you-
    from your feet up to your hair.
    You voice is like a warm breeze
    brushing against my ears...
    I've longed to feel you breathing;
    longed to feel you near,
    for so long,
    and I never knew;
    so many people
    I went through
    just to be with you.
    You were the one I've wanted
    all along...
    Oh I love the way I love you;
    my heart, yet, still flutters,
    still warms at your touch.
    I love every little thing you do;
    I love you more than much.
    I wonder if you dream it too,
    that no matter where, I'm there with you;
    because I always dream we are
    laying together,
    wrapped in our arms.




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