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    dots Submission Name: I learned..dots
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    Author: I039mME
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    dotsI learned..dots
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    i learned that when i talk to people i should be nice
    i learned that before i say anything i should think twice
    i learned that i'll meet a lot of people by time
    i learned that not every two words can rhyme
    i learned that in life i'll meet my true friend
    and i'll meet the one i'll keep going with 'till the end
    i learned that i won't find a shoulder every time i cry
    but i learned how to wipe the tears of my eye
    i learned that the smile can fix a lot of broken things
    even make me fly by giving me freedom wings
    i learned that success is my only choice
    and when i'm saying the truth i should raise my voice
    i learned that i shouldn't be afraid if i'm walking in the right way
    i learned that it doesn't mean i'm a loser if i couldn't make it today
    i learned that it's not important to listen but it is important to understand
    i learned that it's not important to be next to the people you care about but it is important to be hand in hand
    i learned how to take but i also learned that it'll be much better when i give
    but the most important of all.. i learned how to LIVE




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