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I learned..

Author: I039mME
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I learned..

i learned that when i talk to people i should be nice
i learned that before i say anything i should think twice
i learned that i'll meet a lot of people by time
i learned that not every two words can rhyme
i learned that in life i'll meet my true friend
and i'll meet the one i'll keep going with 'till the end
i learned that i won't find a shoulder every time i cry
but i learned how to wipe the tears of my eye
i learned that the smile can fix a lot of broken things
even make me fly by giving me freedom wings
i learned that success is my only choice
and when i'm saying the truth i should raise my voice
i learned that i shouldn't be afraid if i'm walking in the right way
i learned that it doesn't mean i'm a loser if i couldn't make it today
i learned that it's not important to listen but it is important to understand
i learned that it's not important to be next to the people you care about but it is important to be hand in hand
i learned how to take but i also learned that it'll be much better when i give
but the most important of all.. i learned how to LIVE

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