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    dots Submission Name: Balancing Paindots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
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    Description:
       maintaining sanity


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    dotsBalancing Paindots
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    Is not easy growing up and maintain being down to earth

    I try to with empty pockets but for what its worth

    I'm happy that my mom decided to give birth

    not cursed but my obscene language makes things worse

    but first try to understand my point of view

    when things happen and the first person they point at is you

    plus I knew old friends won't always be true but what can I do?

    no flu but I feel sick because life is so cold

    when they uphold your down falls and ignore your important phone calls

    phony people who be making this world wrong happens every "week" but still I'm strong

    getting things done back and forth like ping pong

    I got to get this money, I need this income

    if life is a bitch she gave birth to this poem so when gone a legacy could live on..




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