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Is not easy growing up and maintain being down to earth
I try to with empty pockets but for what its worth
I'm happy that my mom decided to give birth
not cursed but my obscene language makes things worse
but first try to understand my point of view
when things happen and the first person they point at is you
plus I knew old friends won't always be true but what can I do?
no flu but I feel sick because life is so cold
when they uphold your down falls and ignore your important phone calls
phony people who be making this world wrong happens every "week" but still I'm strong
getting things done back and forth like ping pong
I got to get this money, I need this income
if life is a bitch she gave birth to this poem so when gone a legacy could live on..
Submitted on 2012-04-22 10:17:05
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