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Author: DiamondTears
ASL Info:    20/F/Wa
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Class/Type: Poetry /Me
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That feeling that words almost cant capture. That longing and hesitating. The desire for knowledge, but fear to keep you naive.


Hot summer nights,
And I find refuge in the northern lights,
Left to wonder the beauty of existence,
Wanting to close the distance,
Between the humid air and your essence,
Feeling the butterflies of adolescence,
If I touch you I will know everything,
Reason out the thunder and lightning.
I will absolve and dissolve,
All will be resolve.
But I'm so human it holds me back,
Courage to break through, what I lack.
If i stare into the heavens for now,
Perhaps the knowledge will finally allow,
To seap in my veins and heal all my doubt,
Finally ill know what life's all about.

Submitted on 2012-04-23 01:16:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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