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    dots Submission Name: A Dark Angeldots

    Author: MelindaHoutz1
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    There I saw a flash of light as the car came crashing into us. This is the day I DIED.
    19 Hours Left- My name is Crystal; I am 5’8”, I have ice blue eyes, but I wear black contacts, and I have long black hair. As Crystal walk’s down stairs hoping not to be seen, but Crystal is not that lucky. Crystal’s parents are sitting in the dining room drinking coffee. Crystal’s mother is the one to see me, her face goes blank when she sees the way Crystal is dressed. Crystal is wearing a black minnie-skirt, a red tank and black boots. She shakes her head, but I leave before she can protest. Crystal’s best-Friend Angel is waiting for Crystal in her black Volvo. Angel is tall 6’8”, Short black hair (Her hair is blonde but she died it black) and green eyes, but she wears red contacts. Angels sees Crystal and when Crystal get’s into the car she say’s “WOW. Ms. Goth, love the outfit.” We both start to laugh. Angel is wearing a red minnie-skirt, black tank, and black boots. Here is the best thing about Crystal and Angel is that we are both Goths. Crystal starts to do her make-up and Angel say’s to me “Crystal, Are you ready for your night with Chris tonight?” Crystal smile’s, blushes and then starts to brush her long black hair. We get to the school and park. We go into the school and everyone stares at us. Chris comes up behind her and hugs her and kisses her cheek. Chris is tall 6’11”, black hair, with hazel eyes, but he wears black contacts. He pulls her aside and Crystal whispers to him “Happy One Year.” He hands her a small black box and she opens it and it’s an old fashioned ring with a red diamond in the center. He slides it on her ring finger. Crystal hand’s him a long black box and he opens it. He then puts on the black leather chocker, in the center of it, it has a red diamond. We Kiss and head off to class. As we catch up to Angel she is hand in hand with her boyfriend Josh. Josh is Chris’s twin brother, but Josh wears red contacts. The best thing is that we are ALL Goths.
    11 Hours left- After school Crystal, Angel, Josh and Chris all hand out at the guy’s house. Angel asks if anyone wants to go out. Nobody does, except for Angel and Josh.

    2 Hours Left- So, Angel and Josh head out to a bar. She say’s to Josh at the bar “Why is it that people hate us? Just because we are Goths does not mean anything.” --Back at the house Crystal and Chris are watching a movie called “Interview with a Vampire.” Crystal lays her head on Chris’s chest and he has his arms wrapped around her.

    30 seconds left- Angel and Josh get into her car. They are both drunk. Angel pulls out of the parking space and a car is coming from both directions. It hits them and they die instantly.
    Back at the house Crystal and Chris are both curled up watching “The Vampire Diaries.” When they hear a noise coming from Josh’s room. They get up and walk over to his door and open it. They go into his brother’s room to finds a note that says ‘Dear Chris, We were hit by a car and died, I see mom so you guys don’t have to worry. Crystal, I died as well you don’t need to be worried about me, I see dad. Good bye FOREVER. Josh & Angel.’

    Crystal, told Chris of the time her dad died and how they made a pack if one of us die’s then we would try and let the other know that we are okay and see dad.
    Chris told her the story of the same pack. (But they would see their mother)
    That is how I, Angel Died.
    The End.

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