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Happiness Regretted

Author: Black Angel
ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
Elite Ratio:    2 - 16 /96 /96
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Society
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Happiness Regretted

Society has no right to judge
So do not judge yourself
Regret not what you desire
If it brings true joy to your soul
All people are entitled to happiness
No person has a right to look down upon another
No person has a reason to look down upon their self
A person is not bad on a single decision
Or even multiple decisions
Do not dwell in pity and bitterness
Strive for your hope and wants
Hold no anguish

Submitted on 2012-04-24 17:55:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  But all these things are quite... human. I see you are quite young. It is a gift to enjoy poetry so early in life.
| Posted on 2012-04-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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