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    dots Submission Name: Happiness Regretted dots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 16/96/96
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsHappiness Regretted dots
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    Society has no right to judge
    So do not judge yourself
    Regret not what you desire
    If it brings true joy to your soul
    All people are entitled to happiness
    No person has a right to look down upon another
    No person has a reason to look down upon their self
    A person is not bad on a single decision
    Or even multiple decisions
    Do not dwell in pity and bitterness
    Strive for your hope and wants
    Hold no anguish




    Submitted on 2012-04-24 17:55:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      But all these things are quite... human. I see you are quite young. It is a gift to enjoy poetry so early in life.
    | Posted on 2012-04-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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