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    dots Submission Name: The Black Catdots
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    Author: TwilightRaine
    ASL Info:    24 /Female/Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 230
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    Bytes: 195



    Description:
       a poem about my cat.


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    dotsThe Black Catdots
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    Mystic Raven, le chat noir,
    Un petite belle chat.
    She calls to me at night.
    She likes to read my books.
    Purring loud, fur so soft, tiny chat noir.





    Submitted on 2012-04-25 16:35:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, Not sure what this means, but it was really good.
    le chat noir,
    Un petite
    | Posted on 2012-04-26 00:00:00 | by MelindaHoutz1 | [ Reply to This ]


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