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    dots Submission Name: Her Smile :)dots
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    Author: AbsolutelyLost
    ASL Info:    27/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 54/41/33
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHer Smile :)dots
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    I feel alive, almost enchanted, whenever I get to be with her,
    It makes me happy, almost elated, whenever she is beside me.

    I am not sad, or depressed, whenever she is not here,
    It makes me realize, to my surprise, how much her smile entices me.

    It's not that I can't be happy, or be elated, without her being around,
    But there is something, not just about her smile,
    But in the smiles of she, who has ever smiled,
    That made hearts like me reverberate all around.




    Submitted on 2012-04-26 14:00:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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